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Anger Skit

2009-02-09T09:03:00.000-08:00

When I was in the 7th grade I was in my 3rd period class which was Social Studies with mr.lowe. I was laying my head on the table because I just got through eating lunch and I had a really bad stomach ache. And he told me to sit up and do my work. I told him no because I had a stomach ache and he said nice excuse now sit up and do your work before I write you up and send you to the office. I continued to tell him no so he finally wrote me up for not listening. I got mad because I got wrote up and when he handed me the referral I ripped it up and threw it in his face and left the class.

3 Questions About Cole.

2009-02-02T08:29:00.000-08:00

What do other people in the book think about Cole?

People in the book think Cole is a very dangerous kid because. He was arrested for breaking in to a hardware store. Then after robbing the place, he trashed the hardware store. Then somehow a kid named Peter Driscal that was in the 9th grade found out and snitched on Cole. After Cole found out that Peter snitched him out Cole attacked Peter viciously.

How does Cole feel about himself?

Cole thinks he is all that because of what he did to Peter. He also thinks that he is untouchable. But he found out the hard way by the spirit bear.

What do you think/feel about Cole?

I think Cole could be a good kid if, he didn't make all the wrong choices he does.

Roots

2009-01-30T08:45:00.000-08:00

Man- Hand
manicure, manual, manufacture, manuscript

Ped- Foot
pedal, pedestrian, pedicure

Psych- Mind
psychologist, psychic, psycho

Correct Teacher

2009-01-29T08:40:00.000-08:00

If there were one thing I would keep if I had to give away everything I own it would be my books. I would keep my books because they help me disappear into another world. I love to read and forget about my problems for awhile, and I like to curl up with a blanket. I like to turn on some music and I like to read for hours, but if I can't have all the other stuff at least I would like to have some books to read.

Sentence Combining

2009-01-14T08:38:00.000-08:00

Cole shuddered while he had another spasm and chills, while Rosy shoved Edwin really light.

Cole sipped water that was in a glass, while he put it to his lips, and he struggled to swallow pills.

Cole closed his eyes, while Rosy cleaned and bandaged his open wounds.

Sentence Combining

2009-01-08T08:37:00.000-08:00

Cole struggled to shift position, and struggled to raise right knee. All of his life he had been haunted with nightmares, and helplessness.

Cole's stiffness set his joints like hardened cement while he struggled to shift position because the ground was uneven.

Cole grimaced while he struggled to raise his right knee and he couldn't.

All his life he had been haunted with nightmares, and felt helplessness in the Alaskan islands.

Journal

2008-12-10T08:30:00.000-08:00

This one time when I was with my friends we were walking around and another group of kids walked right next to us just staring at us with a weird look on they're faces. I didn't like the way they were looking at me, so I started to say stuff that was offending them. Then we all started fighting and then the cops were called and over half of the people got arrested that were involved in the fight.

circle justice

2008-12-10T05:37:00.000-08:00

Circles are found in the Native American cultures of the United States and Canada, and are used there for many purposes. Their adaptation to the criminal justice system developed in the 1980s as First Nations peoples of the Yukon and local justice officials attempted to build closer ties between the community and the formal justice system. In 1991, Judge Barry Stuart of the Yukon Territorial Court introduced the sentencing circle as a means of sharing the justice process with the community

Sentence combining

2008-12-09T08:32:00.000-08:00

I heard the rumble from the fire that sounded like a freight train. The shelter started to burn as it sucked at the air.

The fire sounded like a freight train as it rumbled through the air and as the shelter burned down.

The shelter started to burn as the flames rumbled through the air like a freight train.

so and because

2008-12-04T08:43:00.000-08:00

Anna went to the store because she needed milk.

Chris ate too much candy, so his stomach hurt.

Richard felt tired, so he bought an energy drink.

Telsa ran after the bus because she woke up late.

I didn't go to school because I was sick

I missed the bus because I couldn't find my shoes

I woke up early, so I can get to school on time.

I saved up some money, so I can get some new shoes.

Sentence combining

2008-12-02T08:33:00.000-08:00

Janet directed and played the drums in the band.

Anthony and Jake are both fine writers.

Maria finished reading War and Peace really fast.

That girl has a calculator and is a whiz at math.

There was only five people in the same class. There was Janet that directed and also played the drums, Anthony and Jake that are two fine writers. Then there was Maria that finished reading War and Peace faster than everyone else. Then there was the girl that always uses a calculator and is a math whiz

Thanksgiving Day

2008-12-01T08:31:00.000-08:00

On Thanksgiving Day I went to Portland to see some family members that I havn't seen in a while. I had alot of fun with everybody. I even got to see my mom and my little sister. It was really fun to spend time with my little sister. I took her out to eat, then I took her to Wonderland and she had a blast there.

The reason I'm thankful

2008-11-25T08:42:00.000-08:00

I am thankful for the people that I live with, because if it wasn't for them I wouldn't be doing the things I'm doing today. Like coming to school every morning, staying out of trouble and the main reason I am thankful is that I have a roof over my head.

Writing Practice

2008-11-20T08:30:00.000-08:00

Sam watched the game last night.

Dan ate some pizza yesterday

The lady at the bus stop called to see what time the bus comes.

The little girl down the street jumped in the cold water.

The kids at the mall pulled the fire alarm.

The kids broke a toy in the store.

My Favorite Place.

2008-11-19T08:37:00.000-08:00

My favorite place to go is Southern, California, where it's hot almost all year round and palm trees all over the place. The air there is fresh every morning and sometimes it's warm at night. The reason I would like to go back is because most of my family is there, and most of my homies are there.

2008-11-18T08:35:00.000-08:00

The lettuce was all over the table.

The tornado was completely unexpected.

Can you try to get here on time?

Is it ok if I go with you?

I should've studied for the test last night.

I dont have any money.

I should've studied for the test last night,Because the lettuce was all over the table in the morning. And while i was watching the weather channel and they said that the tornado was completely unexpected in the next town over. Can you get here on time so I can go with you I dont have any money is that ok.

Constuction Sales

2008-11-06T08:36:00.000-08:00

Case Power and Equipment is one of the largest Case dealerships in the United States, and specializes in selling and renting heavy construction equipment. Our customers include the construction industry, government agencies, commercial companies, and other businesses that rely on us for their equipment, parts, and service of equipment.

Requirements:

4-5 years of experience in the heavy construction industry.
Prior CASE experience is helpful.

Case power and equipment offers a competitive package which includes:

A Competitive Commission Plan
Employer matching 401k plan
Medical and Dental Insurance
Life Insurance
Short-Term and Long-Term Disability
Vacation, Sick, and Holiday Pay

The Election

2008-11-05T08:36:00.000-08:00

Barrack Obama swept as the nation's first black president Tuesday. I think Obama needs to stop the war in Iraq because it is wasting all of the money in the U.S.

Old Century-Railroad

2008-10-28T09:14:00.000-07:00

This is a coup for Salem. The city bought this bridge for a buck in 1999 and now, will turn it into a bike and pedestrian path. Cops can also cross it in an emergency.

Pic's of Salem

2008-10-27T09:02:00.000-07:00

Paranormal Experience

2008-10-22T08:36:00.000-07:00

I like to watch any t.v. show to do with paranormal, like ghost hunters. The reason I like to watch shows, like ghost hunters, is because when I was a little kid I lived in a haunted house for four years and nobody believed me when I said it was haunted, until one day my brother-in-law was in the shower and he was the only one home. He said that when he got out of the shower he saw someone go towards the back door. So he went to check it out and when he got to the back door, he said he saw something like a dark shadow standing in the corner. He said he ran as fast as he could and he went inside and locked all the doors. Then the blinds in the living room all the sudden went up and he said the lights started flickering on and off.

Peer Editing

2008-10-16T09:27:00.000-07:00

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